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hot
Love the stories with the pics!
Great tits.
Show us some more of that hot body.
need more
you gotta show us those tits
need more
need more picture with better angles to see more
pics
i liked it but i want to see more the pics
why???
People read erotica to get off...some may find the artistic value in it, but then again, some don't. So if you're going to place a story in the illustrated section, make sure your pictures are worth gettin off to.
I thought the pictures were very good.....
Considering 99% of stories on lit. have NONE, what is everyone complaining about? Ever try to take pics of someone in a car? It isn't as easy as it looks! Yes, the pics could have been sharper, but I for one am glad they are there. Bravo, Jthserra!!
Fantastic
Very erotic great pictures - keep it up!!!
great story
Great story - short but really erotic
good
good
Bringing Back Memories...
This reminds me of something I did on a long road trip... you never really know how fun those car washes can be till you get one with a lover in the passanger seat.
another one to chech of the list
had a few incidences yet to be published here, and this makes me realy think i should get the old pen and paper out.
cant wait till i can drive now.
great story
nice rhythm. better pics wud hav helped,but alas, mobile cameras hav limits. dont forget to keep ur digicam with u next time for better pics, buddy.
keep adding.
Hot Wax
Loved this story and feel like I've got to go have my car washed complete with "hot wax"! I always thought the car wash would be a great place to grab a "quickie".
O YEAH!!!
Now that was a carwash!!!!!
Not good
This was very amateurish. The Photos were terrible. Read more professional level stories, and keep trying. You will improve.
horrible
the story and pictures were horrible. you should find a new hobby
I cant stand the Anonymous critics
The story was very plausable, and for short story was well done. It gives ones mind a chance to imagine and think. Like good writers used to do before the public became so jaded and mentally crippled, or just plain lazy; for my self I say well done.
I'm sure you can do better
I've seen a 12 year old write a more "erotic" story!! And unless you are 7 this is just bad DO BETTER USE YOUR IMAGINATION!!!
Mkay
Okay I like the idea. Bad execution. There's a lot of potential to this..
beautiful
dnt listen 2 those ppl who said they dnt like this story
I loved it. It was a real turn on 4 me & gave me a new idea 4 me & my bf 2 try..we have this thing where we try to have sex in as Many different places as possible no matter where or how risky:)
Really liked this story!
Never thought of a car wash in this way before! but think you could have opened up a whole new world to me! Beautifully written too! Imagery is great! Keep writing!
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