by carrieoct15
The story is ok, but you should consider having someone edit your stories for grammar, usage, and spelling before you submit them.
I could think of much better stories than this. A grandpa and his granddaughter? You've got to be kidding me.
It was a good story. You should describe more the characters, though.
It is a great story but you should have her Grandpa taking
her virginity at about age 12 or 13.
I love fucking my grandpa. Im trying to get my daddy too but he wont bite. tell me what I should do to get him. Ive tried being naked in front of him but he just tells me to put some clothes on. Now im working on my brother. He is SOOO fucking sexy !!!
Such a sexy story hot!!!!!!!! wow to have a Granpa like that would be a dream!!!!!
OMG What a turn on.....I know incest is wrong, but just thinking about someone in my family fucking me gets me soooooooo wet....write more and let the three of them enjoy
This story is badly written and so stupid it is an insult to all the other excellent writers on here.
Not a very believable story but still pretty good. Don't give up, keep on writing. You have a good incestuous imagination.
TERRIFIC Grandpa - break in that cunt and shove that cock in deep - family fucking comes first - way to go - I wanna play with Grandpa too!
I think every Grandpa should be able to initiate his granddaughter into sex. This was a wonderful story, well written and very erotic. I think perhaps the granddaughter should meet one of her sexy older aunts.