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Positive poison

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by Anonymous

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Nice...

....read. Much enjoyed this, tung.

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by flyguy6907/08/04

A steel-jawed poem

about a frightening situation. Sometimes an unwavering smile is medicine, even if we'd rather cry.

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by 07/08/04

Strength.......

...in horrifying situations makes humour possible. This siimple, gentle prayer for recovery from cancer is very poignant.

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by Angeline07/08/04

Took me two reads

to get this wholly, not because of you but because the poem deserves a thoughtful reading. It says a great deal in few words, which is imo very very good. The juxtaposition of the familiar and the frightening is what really makes it special, I think. :)

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by fawnie07/09/04

very nice!

hitting close to home with this, but i leave smiling, very nice job here. i hope she wins! cheers!

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by WickedEve07/13/04

painful subject

but god, you handled it great! This is powerful writing.

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