All Comments on 'Just the Three of Us'

by michelle2003

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bearleebearleeover 19 years ago
I felt like I was there!

Love short stories and it was written in a way I could imagine myself(and my female friend) as part of the story. Erotic but with a touch of romance in it-very nice!

unit113unit113over 19 years ago
Love your story the three of us

Michelle:

I just wish it was my cock that was buried deep in your pussy as you were licking and finger fucking the womans pussy. I bet I know who the couple was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
make it four

oh yes a slut with a gorgeous ass, how i would love to rim you whilst your friend is fingering your pussy

rfm1rfm1about 19 years ago
The story was Hot but You are on Fire

I liked you story very much. However, after seeing a picture of you it, the photo was imbedded into my mind when I read the story. Oh, how I wish I were the male character.!! Keep writing.

Don1028Don1028over 18 years ago
Ended much better than it started

It was very nicely done

RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 15 years ago
Short but hot.

Enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Super hot.

This is very hot and well written. Many thanks.

exhultantexhultantover 3 years ago
Very short story

So short I was disappointed because the story has merit, but is over too quickly.

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