by X-Factor
The only thing that would have made this story even hotter, is if the author had had Erin tell her fiance on the phone, "I love you!" at the exact moment her lover was shooting his cum deep in her pussy.
The master (bater) is at it again! Your description, ideas, and master(bate)ful skill is really something that I see consistently in your stories. This one is no exception.
Oh my god that was erotic! I liked the part where they were fucking and she was on the phone! My god that drove me nuts!
...the fiance catches them. He captures the lover. Ties him up and sticks his cock up his ass and as he is cuming, calls the slut up to tell her what is happening. The bitch would probably start fucking herself.
Any more stories like this and I won't have a dick left! This one made me spank FURIOUSLY!
Excellent work, as always. I check X-Factor's submissions page for new work regularly.
Great great great stories. What a relief to finally read a story about a woman who cheats because SHE wants to, not because her husband/boyfriend secretly or not so secretly gets off on it.
Excellent. Can't wait to read more.
Randy needs to end erins and jasons love affair with a bullet.
Pat M.
Atlanta,Ga.
this actually happened to me once when i was in england, i phoned her to say hello and she was getting fucked by our neighbor . she told me about it as we spoke and i wanted to come over and fuck her right away. hot story and great memory !!
I'm not sure yet what it is, but the way you write is very effective. you create a solid visual experience ... bravo ! And to think that during this entire sreies, Erin keeps her fiance "cut off"
Good story telling! I was hoping the roommate would help out when Jason got tired out. Then she could take both of them at once!
or their marriage, real trouble ensues. TK U MLJ LV NV
Come on man this is getting ridiculous! You are a sick fuck that's for sure!!!
catch her that is. That's why there was never a wedding. What kind of dumb shit author are you?
He is a Nigger with 3" dick. Illiterate and stupid. "1*" .
None of your characters are worth a plug nickel. Your writing "style" is non-existent.
And your dialogue is horrible. You sure you're old enough to post here? Less than "1".
Hi
Ur story awesome ur really have nice real thought
It's exactly the lover needs so much wet of me he he he
Tx
X-Factor - Don't pay attention to stupid comments. They don't deserve your answer.
Love ALL your stories, anyone that says otherwise is complete idiot...
Pure garbage, just another cum dumpster slut that is just boring....... Idiot below, have the balls to put your name on something before bitching like a little mutt that yaps....
She doesnt like him or even respect him so what point is there to getting married?
I love how the story is getting romantic at the same time that started from being erotic. Well played.
I want Jason to share the slut he is fucking to his friends and make use of her n ditch her.. or Erin find another man n ditch Jason