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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2207/13/04

poem

mentioned in today's reviews.

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by tungtied2u07/13/04

I especially like

magnetic minds exhale
dawns of wonder lust

thank for a lovely read blue.

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by Syndra Lynn07/13/04

perfect-

ly wonderful. Like this a lot Blue!

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by fawnie07/13/04

maybe not erotic..

but it sure had a sensual feel to it.
beautiful poetry.
mystical even! i enjoyed this lovely read ty!

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by WickedEve07/13/04

I'd move

meadow in the second line up to the first line.

Good poem. :)

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