All Comments on 'My Whips and Chain'

yes you did it, but I'm not sure the subject matter matches the structure you chose, as the best structure you could have chosen. I've never seen BDSM as a childlike poem before, and it takes the power away from it for me, not to mention making my skin crawl.

Hey cyn ignore the ones that cannot take a joke please. I thought it was hilarious when you showed it to me before I still think its hilarious now. Ignore the pooh poohers and do more of them. And when someone says their skin crawls ask them if it actually turns them on and they want to taste that whip....LOL. Always, E

being a mother of 2 girls, I wish I could say I am appalled by this really silly HOT fucking poem, but alas, I am not offended, its cool as hell and I will probably read it a thousand times....you should do more in this fashion :)