...phrasing, and I find this much more appealing than your shorter works. Good luck to you in those shadows!
This is getting close to the poetboy I fell in love and lust with. *smirks*
"dipped in blood"? that is so out of place in this poem, unless it refers to the poet, but how am I to know. I don't know what you read. Either refer to it so the reader gets it too, or dip your quill in something that's not so sanguine.
and fully blooded
conjure up some more
Perks's suggestion is a good one, references are nice, even if they are buried
my mind drifted into dark chocolate and red wine when I read this poem, which is just as rich and deep. Beautiful is not the word I am looking for...seductive? exotic? It is beautiful, but that seems almost too trivial of a word. hmmm I really loved it.
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