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mysterious conjurer

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by tarablackwood2207/15/04

Delightful....

...phrasing, and I find this much more appealing than your shorter works. Good luck to you in those shadows!

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by Eumenides07/15/04

Eu's take

This is getting close to the poetboy I fell in love and lust with. *smirks*

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by perks07/15/04

perkspective

"dipped in blood"? that is so out of place in this poem, unless it refers to the poet, but how am I to know. I don't know what you read. Either refer to it so the reader gets it too, or dip your quill in something that's not so sanguine.

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by twelveoone07/17/04

Very nice

and fully blooded
conjure up some more
Perks's suggestion is a good one, references are nice, even if they are buried

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by annaswirls07/17/04

~poet MAN~

my mind drifted into dark chocolate and red wine when I read this poem, which is just as rich and deep. Beautiful is not the word I am looking for...seductive? exotic? It is beautiful, but that seems almost too trivial of a word. hmmm I really loved it.

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