All Comments on 'Yanari: Awakening'

I have a weakness for all the elements ;) Its rare to have a tale in this genre that isnt excruciatingly written. This makes a nice change! I suggest fleshing out the world. I imagine her journeying over idylic or incredible landscapes to some ultimate goal.

Keep up the good work! Keep the stories coming

Please make this a series! It was fantastic, so sensual. Perhaps describe the planet and the rape a bit more.

I could be Yanari. Or better yet, tentacle aliens do decide to "kidnap" (oh no, lol) the women of earth and use us as breeding stations... *sigh*

Breeding Stations... Sounds fun!

You're doing a fine job with this one...I also vote for a 'Series'

In my imagination, Yanari is absolutely scrumptious...all night long...YUMMY !!!

``If only...

I could be Yanari. Or better yet, tentacle aliens do decide to "kidnap" (oh no, lol) the women of earth and use us as breeding stations... *sigh*

If only I could make a story with you haha

this story as well as the one before and after are quite unique, I really like your writing style. ive read this story and the others multiple times and it just gets me hard with the images I picture. great story great work. wish you were still around writing