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by Belegon

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dreamsweetdreamsweetover 19 years ago
anticipation

I loved this one. It was sweetly simple. And I can imagine that agony well.

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Yes!

The anticipation is so, so intoxicating! ~Imp

tolyktolykalmost 19 years ago
Now that's..

a sweet poem. Wonderful emotions conveyed through that, superb work.

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
I would

kiss you every minute if I had the chance...

Lovely, sweet poem, Bels...

~Honey

AppleBiterAppleBiteralmost 19 years ago
Very touching

I loved this poem -- very moving. The cadence was beautiful. Thanks for sharing, Bel. :)

PlasterCasterPlasterCasterover 18 years ago
I know how it feels...

Everyone, I'm sure, has been able to relate to this poem sometime in their life. You write great poetry, filled with emotion. Keep it up.

PEACE,

PlasterCaster

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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The sweet agony of that first kiss comes through so well.

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