All Comments on '36 Virtues of the Concubine'

The only critcisms I have for the story is it's extreme use of the flowery language. It works, you pull it off well, but it does get a little ponderous at times. I'm interested to see if you develop more of an actual plot to this, as right now it's a little thin.

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The flowery language is completely appropriate in this context, and you use it perfectly. All in all a fabulous story and I hope you write more

people shouldn't mess with stuff they don't understand. Even though we only meet Randy through the djinn's memories and his sisters' reactions, you very clearly get across the point that even if the djinn is a manipulative opportunist, anything (almost) would be better than Randy. Thanks!

Enjoyed the story and thought the language was appropriate. Would like to see more chapters. Looks like there is a lot more to develop in their relationship.

Thank you for not dehumanizing women in this story. This is one of the best I have ever found on Literotica. Bravo.

You are very good, stylish and creative. No one has thought of using a djinn like that.

PLEASE CONTINUE, I WANT SOME MORE....!!!!

It's more creative than the average story, I like it. More?

Hey there, just saying that I love this story and I've read it about 5 times or so. I was wondering if you were planning on making a continuation of the story. Thanks for your time.