All Comments on 'The Eyes on the Train'

That was an awesome story! The different viewpoints were a little confusing, but the story was very hot. You made me want to ride the London underground myself!

Well done. The title of your story grabbed me, and my body is beaming from the story. The attention to detail is particularly good. Thank you. Check out my story!

--Severin

Very nice, Emi - this story will be going through my dirty mind when I travel on the Underground this afternoon - will you be there, I wonder...?