All Comments on 'This Madness'

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Great look

at a subject close to our hearts. Nice job.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
love it!!

I resist the urge to purge every single day, can barely stomach the news or paper anymore. You have an awesome, unforced rhyme going on inside this poem which gives it vivacious life of its own, very good!! :)

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
That pretty

much sums it up.

"our words survive us

show we once existed

saw and felt

gorged ourselves on

life?s wonders

our blunders"

I love that

Nice job.

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyalmost 20 years ago
maybe..

i'll reconsider writing!

now there's a maddening thought!!

this was almost readible in 1 breath..very nice!

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