by tungtied2u
I resist the urge to purge every single day, can barely stomach the news or paper anymore. You have an awesome, unforced rhyme going on inside this poem which gives it vivacious life of its own, very good!! :)
much sums it up.
"our words survive us
show we once existed
saw and felt
gorged ourselves on
life?s wonders
our blunders"
I love that
Nice job.
i'll reconsider writing!
now there's a maddening thought!!
this was almost readible in 1 breath..very nice!