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Anonymousover 19 years agoInteresting...
Nice try but needs to be more detailed & longer.
Don't give up yet!
tdelain69over 19 years agoI like
I like your story line and think you have potential. You do need to get someone to proof your work before you submit it to be published. A few misused words, for example, here instead of hear.
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