All Comments on 'Swim & Sangria'

by Dotrice1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Really good

Really good, deliciously sexy, and well balanced. The drinks with Mike were a nice touch, so it didn't all flow straight into the plot.

mismusedmismusedover 19 years ago
Nice story

Excellent pace and sweet descriptions for the most part. More.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wonderful story

Great story. How about taking it a little further. I would love to see them wind up together.

liferguyliferguyover 18 years ago
Nice Story

Luved every word of it...not ot hurried, & juicy in all the right places..

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not complete, but nice

Dotrice, my dear being gay yourself, you know very well that between two ladies (one lesbian, and one to become)there is more than a pussy hole to explore. Hope to read you more, but make it naughtier.

THANK YOU.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A wonderful story

Thank you Dotrice foe the wonderful sexxxxxxie erotic passionate sensual story, Please keep writting these stories... Your blind reader John

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
:)

That was yummy. Thank you. :)

fingers46fingers46over 11 years ago
Yummy indeed

Great episode.left me wishing for more

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