All Comments on 'The Caliph's Dancer'

and lovingly. I'm not a slave, but if I were, I would want a master as loving as you write.

Very well done. A tour de force. bravo.

I like the idea theme of this story, but it falls flat. There is obviously much more to the relationship between master and slave that is not explored in this story. I think if that was explored further, I would have been more interested in the characters and found the story more enjoyable over all.