All Comments on 'Cold Comfort'

by tungtied2u

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BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
awesome!

i loved the way this flowed off my tongue, right to the very last drip! ~winks~

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
this is great

I love alliteration and this offers so much more. The frozen mind and thaw of imagination, or coming back to life after a cold spell. I can relate. Nice!

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
you did great with the alliteration

not too much, just enough to make it a great read.

*No longer using the thermometer.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Excellent example of employment of alliteration; pulls the reader in just to continue to hear the sounds you've generated here.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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