All Comments on 'Splish Splash, I Was Given A Bath'

Your story had a wealth of visual stimulous as well as deep penetrating description. Keep it up young man - wish I was your mother.

Normally I like a story with a slow build up. However, I must admit, this author did succeed to create short hot story that I sincerely loved.

I can only say keep the stories coming.

What ever happened to originality? This is a reworking of many other stories, only with much less sex appeal.

Good, but broken leg = Cast on it = No Water

What a waste of time!

Leave writing to writers, please.

Have you never heard of punctuation? It seems as though English is not your first language, judging by the awful mess you made of this. And you have not used a tiny shred of imagination with it. This story is just the same thing that has been written countless times before. Unoriginal, unsexy, unreadable.

I liked your story.

The begining was the best.

The part in the pool was awesome.

I would have like some more of that.

The more build up the better.

But anyway, a good story none the less. Thanks

Keep writing.

great story don't listen those assholes they don't shit just keep on writting more

yyyaaayyy incest!!!!!!!

"Incest"--I prefer the term "family fucking"--sure is great. Of course all forms of it are terrific--a father sticking his big veiny daddy-dick up his happy Little Princess's adorable little coochie, a big brother giving it to his kid sister good and hard between her legs and blowing his brotherly balls up her sweet little slit. But top of the heap is a boy visiting his mother's mommy-hole and sliding his big fat cock up the same cunt he came out of. That is just so cool. The lad is tingling all over his body, he fucks the shit out of his beloved mom, he's bursting with boyish pride as he gives his mother the best cums of her life. Finally, he gives a loud grunt and unloads his young balls up inside her, shooting her a huge twatful of his creamy semen. It's happening more and more all the time, all over the country. So, people, get used to it.

A hot story with a familiar theme.