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Opening

bySelena_Kitt©
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by tarablackwood2207/27/04

your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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by Tathagata07/27/04

Some great

images.
Nice work

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by Syndra Lynn07/27/04

oh yes!

this is a great poem. wonderful metaphors and vivid images. nice work!

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by jd4george07/27/04

You know your craft!

I loved the line "this hunger for thick honey turning black". Though tempted, I know better than to be a thief! (LOL) I intend to watch for your name.

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by flyguy6907/27/04

Very nice

Loved the metaphors regarding navigation. I don't fully understand the last stanza, but the final line is wonderful.

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