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by Selena_Kitt

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Some great

images.

Nice work

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
oh yes!

this is a great poem. wonderful metaphors and vivid images. nice work!

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
You know your craft!

I loved the line "this hunger for thick honey turning black". Though tempted, I know better than to be a thief! (LOL) I intend to watch for your name.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Very nice

Loved the metaphors regarding navigation. I don't fully understand the last stanza, but the final line is wonderful.

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