has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.
this is a great poem. wonderful metaphors and vivid images. nice work!
I loved the line "this hunger for thick honey turning black". Though tempted, I know better than to be a thief! (LOL) I intend to watch for your name.
Loved the metaphors regarding navigation. I don't fully understand the last stanza, but the final line is wonderful.
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