All Comments on 'Princess & The Barbarian'

YES! Please continue the story, it was incredible. It reminded me of a historical romance and the rape scene was incredibly erotic.

Shoot yes, please continue!

If you're asking if we want more, heck yea!

Well I for one most definitely want more... Very yummy story...

Please continue this story. I can't wait to read more chapters!!

Very,very good story.

I am waiting with bated breath for

the next chapter.

... a second-person POV story on here that I actually enjoyed! Great job; thank you for sharing!

Great story!!!! you're very talented, I beg you to continue this one. Thank you

Your present tense narrative serves to put the reader within the story, giving it a voyeristic approach. I'm hoping that the kidnapped princess is wrong in her belief that she'll only be used as a sex slave; here's hoping that you'll inject some tenderness into the barbarian-princess relationship. Loved it!!

that was a great story !! theres something very hot and sexy about a wild barbarian who just takes what he wants its dominance that gets to me i love the whole woman being taken by the big strong man with the big cock *smiles*

you use alot of detail too i love it details always good but yes i think you should finish it definately !

Loved this sexy story ....totally identified with the princess and became very very wet reading what was happening to her. Deliciously arousing.

Of course to be continued. That story is fuckin brilliant! Pure genius!! Write more!

Yes, very well done indeed. It's not easy to write in this category but you pull it off amazingly.

It was a rape story alright but you wrote it so well it didn't make one feel guilty reading it but to feel erotic.

Partly I believe when you want to write something so nasty you have to have a good command of grammar so as not to make this story felt cheap and sluttish.

Also you showed us the warring emotions of your heroine and that was why we were so drawn into the story like we were actually experiencing the ordeal.

A great job well done.

Kudos!!!

you have got to continue this story. i am begging you. i must have read this story like 10 times, it is amazing

I loved the story. It was just the kind of thing I was looking for. Thanks

Just what I've been trying to fine for the last ...god, months actually. Thank you very much :D. Please continue I'd love to see it progress.

There's no chapter 2? This makes me sad.

More please! Well written and very exciting.

but it stopped being rape/non-consent the minute she asked him not to stop

Not crazy about narrative stories. I prefer first person or omni, but I like the story. It seems to fit in this case. Please continue.

More please!

Please learn how to properly write a story. It's ridiculous how much praise this story has gotten. No one would buy a book written like this. Why do people think to write a story this way?! You're trying to put the readers in the place of the woman yet have this be her at the same time and it doesn't work at all. Frankly I'm surprised it has so many votes. Though, if you'd wrote well (which I'm sorry but you don't) you could've had a pretty high ranking story.

Please, please write another.

Continue. This is so fucking hot.