All Comments on 'Grilln' the Lime'

make me miss the ocean so badly!! wonderful poem sandspike, totally loved it!!

this poem. I want a beer. Oh, it's only 7 am. Thanks Spike.

sure know the feelings well and you describe the surf and sitting at happy hour listening to reggae...the thunderbirds and twistin that lime....brilliant...blue

make me want a beer, but certainly left me with want of a big boulder facing the ocean to plop my fanny on.

lovely read..i love love love ocean poems!

Actually, sand, this was a better ad for Corona than most of their own work. I like the way you captured the images.

Favorite part is:

Each wave a current event,

each sunset seen through a longneck,

nice flow to it!

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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