All Comments on 'Together, Forever! Ch. 01'

by simply_cyn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Emm...

Victoria came out far too well adjusted to be delusional.

Maybe, you could've made her a teacher driven insane by unruly children, or soming.

The way it's been presented doesn't encourage one to look forward to the ch2. Besides, who onEarth want save a movie star? They are all gay.

Not that I'm anti-gay. In fact, I'm pro-gay. More gay men, more womin ferrus!

Thud!

Kaplonk!

Puke!

To the oblivion. . .

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