All Comments on 'Just One'

I liked the overall feel and the look of the poem, but the second stanza left me unsure. Did you omit something, or am I reading it wrong?

I've been in that situation time and again, and I think I know the way you think and reason here. But in a way, each stanza is a pretty stand-alone statement, only loosely related to the others in terms of core message. It all gets a little ambvivalent... maybe that's the whole point?

while it isnt as up to the same standard as your other poems, it holds its own, for what you are trying to say, the message comes clear on through. You are the one, the one who has been there, like the old saying, nice guys finish last,but hey, at least youre the nice guy and that scores huge points with me ;)

and it seems at times that being overlooked is just par for the course. i enjoyed the read as it brought back situations all to close.