All Comments on 'Tongues'

well written and covers the subject completely. Now if

I could just take that back, oops too late.

I won't mind. As long as it's tongue in cheek.

Being new to this, I find it hard to be less than verbose, in poetry, but you take a simplistic tack, here, that gets to the heart without beating around the bush. Nicely done.

like blades in the mouths of lovers.. hmmmm..... nice image, and yet not so nice image, isn't it?

Damn girl! Quite a sharp metaphor (I hope!) This one will stick with me for quite a while-- thanks for sharing these poems with us yesterday, today.

I dont use the thermometer

forceful driving poem, did someone use the word drill yet? it drilled the word *tongues* into my minds eye, made me see the whole thing, I LOVE poetry that gives me an instant vision, great work :)

first two lines captured me

last three lines floored me