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Autolycusover 19 years agoso simple but wonderfully constructed
I am probably the only one who is going to comment on the form of this poem but before that sentiment is something near and dear to me and therefore best left to others.
The rhythm moves beautifully and the ringcomposition gives it a wonderful closure. All in all a wonderful poem:)
duckiesmutover 19 years agosmiles softly....
...loves that, in reading your words, a reader sees your heart...and it's beautiful.
Anonymousover 19 years agoA look inside...
A great introspective look at a relationship and it's dynamics... Well written.
skywriterxxxover 19 years agolovely poem...
MMMMMMMMM, I see we have a somewhat similar poetry style...
This is nice...very nice!
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