All Comments on 'Interminable'

....that I think would benefit by some restructuring and punctuation. It is not the type of free-run ramble that can survive intact without proper pausing.

in my opinion. The lack of breaks in the poem helps carry the feeling of no rest or help that the title and the images imply. Sorry to disagree Miss Blackwood!

it's meaning well written. i'll remain neutral as far as structure. lol call me wimp!!