All Comments on 'Sarah Shows Off Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep on Writing

Your doing better but you definately need to make your stories longer and actually get into the story!!! Quit teasing already girl....Damn!! LMAO :-P

kendahl6969kendahl6969over 19 years ago
Great Starts

So much potential and thought in the storyline, if you could just detail it a little more,as others have said. Enjoy yourself!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
You're bringing his mom into your sexcapades?

That took/takes guts!

tdelain69tdelain69over 19 years ago
MORE MORE MORE

You have to have more of this story! You need to make your stories longer and more detailed. Get into a little sex and describe it all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep The Show Cumin

Great second chapter! Great turn on! Just wish our society was more into this! But we are all such pruds that it is sickening! No matter what we could learn allot from our European friends!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 19 years ago
Sarah is getting better & better!

Your great! Please tell us more!

Emma ManchesterEmma Manchesterover 19 years ago
Let's SEE you then!

Great stories & IF you really do like showing off, why not post a photo in your Bio?

I love showing my body off, see my story to see where it led...

Regards

Emma

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice start

This is a nice start but I agree with others, they need to be longer and let's get into sex with one or all of the others.

respect_4_womenrespect_4_womenover 16 years ago
Great !

Great Stories; added them to favourites. But where are the sequels? More, More, More ! (please...)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

fantastic story, just wish more happened with the family. hope the men get naked too next day at the pool!

chilickherchilickherover 11 years ago

Keep it cumming I can't wait to see what or who does Sarah next.

jonyoungaujonyoungauover 8 years ago

Sad it hasnt continued, hope one day you do.

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