Awesome story! I hate to see it end. But then again, I can always re-read it!
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Anonymous08/30/04
Good
Wasn't as hot as some of the others, but still all the same, it was great.
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Anonymous10/23/05
WOW!
The story was amazing! you are an amazing writer, you should write books! SO GOOD! i cannot express how good this story is on words. you are an amazing writer.
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Anonymous10/16/07
give me more
i believe this is the best ive ever read. it was close to what my wife does to me on a regular basis;will read more of your work if i can
"Amy the Nurse's Aid" is an excellent story. To begin with the writing is technically competent--grammar, syntax, spelling, etc. The teasing scenes are vivid and exciting, but they fit into a well-constructed story. There is plot, characters, continuity, and suspense. There's even a bit of conflict. Some scenes are very serious, while others give some comic relief.
Keep up the good work, Peter.
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Anonymous12/13/10
Awesome story
Exquisite. This is one of my all-time favorite stories, and has been since I first discovered it online 5 or 6 years ago. Great to find it again on Literotica. The many scenes of denial are well-written and extremely exciting. Can't wait to re-read your other stories here!
English
WOW!
Awesome story! I hate to see it end. But then again, I can always re-read it!
Good
Wasn't as hot as some of the others, but still all the same, it was great.
WOW!
The story was amazing! you are an amazing writer, you should write books! SO GOOD! i cannot express how good this story is on words. you are an amazing writer.
give me more
i believe this is the best ive ever read. it was close to what my wife does to me on a regular basis;will read more of your work if i can
Praise for "Amy the Nurse's Aide"
"Amy the Nurse's Aid" is an excellent story. To begin with the writing is technically competent--grammar, syntax, spelling, etc. The teasing scenes are vivid and exciting, but they fit into a well-constructed story. There is plot, characters, continuity, and suspense. There's even a bit of conflict. Some scenes are very serious, while others give some comic relief.
Keep up the good work, Peter.
Awesome story
Exquisite. This is one of my all-time favorite stories, and has been since I first discovered it online 5 or 6 years ago. Great to find it again on Literotica. The many scenes of denial are well-written and extremely exciting. Can't wait to re-read your other stories here!
Superb!
I really enjoyed reading this. Excellent.
Hottest Story
That was incredible. Like a bestseller, I couldn't stop reading it.
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