by Randi Grail
excellent poem
i really like the feel of it
wonderful rhythm to your word choices
Lots to savor in this poem. Thanks so much for sharing it.
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Thanks for taking us on a whirlwind tour of your mind, Randi! Wonderful images and phrasing.
Q: Aqua Vera? Is this a deliberate concoction? Or did you mean Aqua Vita (water of life), or Aqua Verita (water of truth)? What is your intent?