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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve08/10/04

this is my kind of poem

You slapped me with it from the first line and now I want a total poetry spanking.

Yes, that was compliment.


*my thermometer is stuck between the cheeks of some other poem.

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by Tathagata08/10/04

Your poem

has been mentioned on the poetry review thread

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by annaswirls08/10/04

damn Eve you stole my comment!

Ang, thanks for writing this for me and Eve's enjoyment :)
j/k

I love when you write like this, I bet you have fun with it too!

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by poetboy82408/10/04

tight

tight as a leotard -- luv'd it!

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by LeBroz09/11/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.



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