You slapped me with it from the first line and now I want a total poetry spanking.
Yes, that was compliment.
*my thermometer is stuck between the cheeks of some other poem.
has been mentioned on the poetry review thread
Ang, thanks for writing this for me and Eve's enjoyment :)
I love when you write like this, I bet you have fun with it too!
tight as a leotard -- luv'd it!
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