All Comments on ''Til Death Us Do Part'

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lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
At first...

I thought this was going to be an angry poem, but it turned out to be a very sad one instead. I could really feel the hurt. Nice job.

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
We're cursed by the choices we make.

Yeah, I know that's in the poem. Here, I'm talking about setting up metered rhyming patterns, and then abandoning them. Metaphorically, you made a vow and broke it.

Like I said, we're cursed by the choices we make.

This poem is worth tightening the meter.

SensualMaleSensualMaleover 19 years ago
Cute!

Beautifully written too!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Lesson Learned

She has felt the pain

Has learned well his lessons

And now she's gone

And someone will learn

Tomcats are eternal and unchanged

As are their stripes

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Saying goodbye.

Lament for a love lost to another. Wishes and admonishments as she closes love's door. A poetic pearl!

angel4u2angel4u2about 17 years ago
Or before...

'Til Death Us Do Part...

Yes, I love this poem. I know how it feels when you are treated that way. Hope you are doing ok!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
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I love you...

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHATS OLD PUSSYCAT

the TomCat howled too much. TK U MLJ LV NV

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