All Comments on 'Long Drive'

almost that same routse, Miami to Portland maine, wishing I had someone to kiss... all the way there :)

and so evocative in its detail! Love everything about this poem, but especially these lines:

I stare in the mirror

For a hint

Of your lipstick

Checking the corners

Of my mouth

For a deeper red

Yum. The last three lines also really struck me. I'm copying and saving this one. Thanks, Bel. Great work. LJ