All Comments on 'Whispers'

by Liar

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sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
I like it

The flick and words work for me, then again who hasn't

been caught with their hands in the cookie jar.

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
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Perfect pic for the words, Liar

trendyredheadtrendyredheadover 19 years ago
wow

You say so much with so few words! If walls could talk...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
select.

A few chosen words ~ aptly selected ~ a beautiful poetic thought is born.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Nicely done ~ even got me to whisper.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
NO FLOWERS IN THE WALLS

or for the room to bear. TK U MLJ LV NV

roc1knightroc1knightalmost 4 years ago

I wonder it is the scenario that two having sex next door in a motel.

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