All Comments on '4 a.m.'

...what it would read like without the forced, intial caps and broken into three verses...

...and maybe an ellispe, or two...

T'is a kone, n'est-ce pas, this sound of one hand?

Thanks, Belegon.

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

I've been there and done that!! Good poem dollface!

I've spent many an early morning, longing for the day that I could just roll over and fulfill the desires instead of forcing my eyes to remain open just to have a few more minutes... Took me back, and I absolutely know the feeling. Nice work, sweetie.

~lucky

one handed typer to another...bravo,handsome!

job well done.

*hugs*

v~

Even the Sandman cannot overpower such determination. Nice work, Bel. ~Imp

I was just there the other night, or was it morning, who can tell and does it matter at 4 a.m.? Very nice.

I love the way your sentences are so strong, yet leave a wonder within th ewhole poem., It is almost an ominous feel, I just really enjoyed reading this :)

maria

I know the feeling of wanting to overpower sleep in favor of staying online.

Tap, tap, tap,

typing

at 4 a.m.

the work's never done;

whoever wants it to end?

Go on - keep on tap, tap, tapping.

Caught it perfectly. The sence of pushing yourself to write just one more line.

OK another, then I'll stop.

Well, maybe ONE more before I go to bed.

Nocturnal activity in the Virtual World.