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Without Thorns

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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata08/18/04

Some very

nice language here..

~Pert pink nipples like seeds
Sweet enough to be eaten,~

I loved that line.
Not bad for a first poem.

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by sandspike08/18/04

smooth.....

this is like a fine brandy it went down well.

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