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Fire Meets Ice

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by jd4george08/18/04

The last two verses...

...don't seem to meet the expectation of the first three. Perhaps they were more obvious than the nice metaphors earlier.

I also wonder why "red, white and blue".

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by Maria239408/18/04

hmmm

red, marks from the heat of wax, or from the cold of the ice, which can cause blue as well, white as her skin,very sexy poem, enjoyed thinking of it with my eyes closed :)

** i also dont use the thermothingie

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by thegirlfriday1108/19/04

sexy

and thought provoking

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