All Comments on 'Fire Meets Ice'

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jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
The last two verses...

...don't seem to meet the expectation of the first three. Perhaps they were more obvious than the nice metaphors earlier.

I also wonder why "red, white and blue".

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
hmmm

red, marks from the heat of wax, or from the cold of the ice, which can cause blue as well, white as her skin,very sexy poem, enjoyed thinking of it with my eyes closed :)

** i also dont use the thermothingie

thegirlfriday11thegirlfriday11over 19 years ago
sexy

and thought provoking

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