All Comments on 'Blind Date'

by irishcatsmeow

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
makes me

want to ask " So what happened??"

I liked this alot

just enough description to paint a very clear ( and enticing) picture.

The "Braille lipstick..cluttered purse" lines were right on

Nice work

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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really liked your descriptions! nice

lostandfounderlostandfounderover 19 years ago
Although I've never been

on a blind date where I saw it as a rocket launch (more like a drop off a cliff, hoping to get the engine started) I like what you've done here.

"No expectations.

Yeah, right."

Sums up things nicely. Good sense of dread and hope. Rounds up to a hundred.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
yes,

women do this, or something similar, even when they're not going on a blind date. :)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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One view of a blind date

In the form of a countdown;

What'd be fun would be

The male's expectations

Seen in juxtaposition.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews, a picking from Lit's archive.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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