by irishcatsmeow
want to ask " So what happened??"
I liked this alot
just enough description to paint a very clear ( and enticing) picture.
The "Braille lipstick..cluttered purse" lines were right on
Nice work
on a blind date where I saw it as a rocket launch (more like a drop off a cliff, hoping to get the engine started) I like what you've done here.
"No expectations.
Yeah, right."
Sums up things nicely. Good sense of dread and hope. Rounds up to a hundred.
women do this, or something similar, even when they're not going on a blind date. :)
One view of a blind date
In the form of a countdown;
What'd be fun would be
The male's expectations
Seen in juxtaposition.
This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews, a picking from Lit's archive.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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