All Comments on 'View from a Bridge'

poem very much. Especially this:

Even their obvious fight

strained his heart

with a desperate jealousy.

I like what you did with this poem, how you presented it...how you showed the man's state of mind by not only his actions but by his observations. Good job!

I think this is a great job. I missed his jealousy at

their fight the first time around. Maybe I haven't been

hurt enough to feel that way. This is once I'm glad

I read another's comment.

made me cry, I can just feel the ache in his heart. very well done, albeit oh so sad