All Comments on 'Girlfriend's Drunk Roommate'

What a fucking classic, from the description of the girl- "half Japanese and white around 5'2 around 100 pounds long dark hair and green eyes and very exotic looking," to the" big dark brown nipples that stuck out like pencil erasers all the time", I was entranced! And the way the character raped her was just perfect: "So here I was with my dick in her ass slowly going down and slipping out of her ass starting to wonder does she know this is me or what."

It just got better and better, and hooked me in with a big silly grin on my face, quickly getting aroused despite myself. The icing on the cake came with the brilliant way you handled the conclusion, doing away with the over-rated and ridiculous trappings of grammar and punctuation and just telling it the way it is. I've gotta quote it for anyone who might be reading this, it's brilliant:

"As I was standing there in her doorway looking at her she looked and smelled like sex she walked up to me and said good thing he left early or you would not have got to fuck me like you did."

Fucking bravo man, bravo!

You're one of the few good hegemonic males left in this world and you fucking rock!

woohoo that was hot! well done, hope you continue

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm absolutely fucking brill

Lots of grammer errors...would have rated higher if you had done a little proof reading.

Great story blew my load twice reading this story. It could use some proofing but other than that it was great.

everythin was good cept the man cum fantasy... u might be a bit of a fag there bud.

So did you knock her up, or what? Maybe she quits going out at night so the two of you can keep fucking?

Grammatical errors hell. It's hard to type while your jacking off.

Nice story. She sounds so fucking HOT!

Last line ruined it.

... THE LAST LINE MAKES BOTH OF THEM FULLY HUMAN!

He thought he was stealing her pussy & her ass, & was ready to settle for that. (Beggars can't be choosers!) She knew it was him & wanted to tell him she enjoyed the sex. She essentially told him, '"I knew it was you & i am glad we did what we did."

Damn my man rapes

My girlfriend has a roommate that is hot and my girlfriend know I want her bad specially in a threesome,,,the other day while we where fucking I told my girlfriend I which your roommate pussy was in my face while I am fuck u!!!!! And she Surprise me told me go in her room and get her dirty painty so U can smell her while u fuck me and that turn me on even more my cock was hard even hard but when I smell that dirty painty the awesome smell that she had was so amazing I have never smell pussy like that ?///now she want me to get her painty and fuck her all the time.... can wait to real fuck her roommate