All Comments on 'Rites of Passage Ch. 01'

by Evolution20XX

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Loving it. Waiting for part 2.

Story's real good so far. And poised tantalisingly.

Part 2 soon. Please!

- JT

sacksackover 19 years ago
excellent introduction....

I learned a lot about paintball, too! You write well and we have a taste of what might happen in part 2, which I am looking forward to reading!

RanDog025RanDog025almost 2 years ago

My kind of story so far! 5 BIG FAT STARS!

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