by Sabledrake
That was one awfully good story. Scary but exciting too.
Not an easy thing to do.
My compliments.
What a fun read! This had everything as far as I was concerned... an actual storyline with an interesting plot, well-developed characters, and buckets of gore. And actual good writing and grammar?! Wow! Loved the night attack of the bat creatures on the camp. Not too mention, despite the horror of the the heroine's situation, it was also very hot reading. Fantastic work!
This was terrifying! But I couldn't stop reading. Very different from anything else I've read.. you have great mastery of description.
Horrifying but a turn on nevertheless!
i was really captured by the text of the story please write more, very good stuff!
As others have said, well crafted, good story, technically excellent. Bravo.
Breathtaking outstanding - a true masterpiece.
Thanks for sharing with hugs and kisss
Sybille