All Comments on 'Heels in Bed'

loved the side story inside the story the dirty talk was a turnon somewhat overall a great read. "jakk"

I wish I could have been able to vote a 200 for this. This is just flat out, pure, raw, adulterated lust! It reminds me of something I saw written on a car once: "I wish my wife was as dirty as the car!" Every word clearly illustrated the story, absolutely fantastic.

Extremely hot. You do wonders with the dialogue. One of the sexiest female characters I've seen.

This story REALLY reflects what this category is all about. A wife can be a slut - but should be a whore and slut for her husband - not for anyone that can get a hard on.

One of the best in this category that I have read in a LONG TIME.

Would like to read LOTS more like this one instead of lying, cheating, deceiving pig/sluts that normally show up in this category.

Damn hot! Wish I was greeted that way when I come home from work....LOL!!

Awesome writting. Very Erotic.

NOW THIS IS A LOVING WIFE!

Every man would like to be greeted like this when he comes home.

Fantastic. Just love the nice chat. All women should understand that men want their wife to be a slut in the bedroom!

That's right Cindy, you ought to act just like this!

-this- is what one expects from the category of loving wives.

i love how beautifully you entwine the affection they have for eachother with the lust that also consumes them.

well done.

This is just the way that it should be. If the marriage can stay at a place like this it should last forever. So much more going on then just what is being said. Nice work. anon jerry

What else is there?

will the twain ever meet. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very hot. And faithful! How about that.

It's a definite requirement for my bed....

Could have been good if the writer had skills.