All Comments on 'Quiet Desperation'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
started off well..........

....but why the shakespearian bit when they first get together "the violation of her privacy" and later on "ovulating" spoilt a good topic i.e. nasty wife get one over on her ...what happened to vicki?? can't be much of a catholic can he

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
not bad...

does he knock up his bitches?

don87654don87654about 18 years ago
Great reading!

No birth control and she wants to continue to be his girlfriend even tho he is married? We need more of this, with him breeding her over and over and over. Perhaps she has many of his babies in the future without a care if she marries him or not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Just like my very own life

Its just as if you have an inside knowlege of my life. By the way my love is my wife's first cousin. Thanx.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great

Many more continuatons. Great story. Love it

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