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First day of School

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by tarablackwood2209/07/04

your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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by jd4george09/07/04

Teacher... may I go to the bathroom?

Because the subject matter gives me nightmares, and I don't want to do the homework! Sharp and succinct!

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by sandspike09/07/04

it doesn't take 50 lines....

to tell it all. good JOB

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by minsue09/07/04

First came the goosebumps

then the tears.

(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

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by Anonymous09/07/04

I like it

ok, loved it, you waste not a single word, and hit us hard with truth, which happens to be so rare these days. keep'em comin' ;)

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Brave

...and extremely written tribute.

Great job hon. ;-)

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by annaswirls09/08/04

memorial

this is perfect
no sentiment
just what the coldness
hard truth
facts

well done

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by LeBroz02/28/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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