All Comments on 'Anal Nurse Ch. 01'

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SamuelxSamuelxover 19 years ago
Nice story !

A Thrilling story of backdoor sex and exploration. I liked it !

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
NIce Start

Good start; makes me want to read the rest(?)...I hope any add'l chapters get more into the sex part

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Love Anal Nurse!

You will love the picture being painted for us! Be paint and enjoy the ride!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good start

not a bad start but sort of a let down because it doesn't lead to any steamy coupling as of the moment. which i gather would be in the next installment. but most readers want more tantalizing bits to linger on if you don't get into any sex. so you need to build the sexual tension either higher or sooner.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
more and more

gimme some more of this.....more 'backdoor' adventure

mmarfoxmmarfoxabout 13 years ago

Oh my God! This may be my favorite damn series on here. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Sucks

This is no place for a planned book, absolutely no action.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 10 years ago
This is...

a decent beginning of a chapter of a story. You have ingredients to make a good story, but there isn't enough of it written to offer any useful rating or constructive criticism. Because of what is not in this so-called chapter, it belongs in the Non-Erotic category.

TYWhore4LifeTYWhore4Life10 months ago

You have created a home for my attention and desires. Great writing and I will continue to read until the end! Thank you!

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