by Girl Friend
This is terrible, not sexy at all, I'd rather watch paint dry. No imagination. What else can I say, just awful and badly written..
What English school did you go to? I'd insist on a refund and resit my exam at a different school! Seriously, please stop writing stories, they are abysmal. A nice idea totally ruined by lack of spirit.
Sorry but this is a load of rubbish. I took the time to read some of your other stories and sense from their content that double penetration is a very common theme. Is this you trying to express your own desires? I would like to say that your other stories were better written, but unfortunately, that was not the case.
Katee
.................................................... Would u honestly want your wife fucked by some guy with aids or stuff?