All Comments on 'Our Bedroom'

A well crafted piece - I just wanted to be there.

Sex for sex's sake is arousing but add love and it flows with passion!

This was a nice story

Just what you said!

I was really enjoying it until he had to make me imagine the smell of shit filling the bed and the thought of a shit covered finger in my pussy. Of course maybe he would then like to clean it out with his tongue.

Another fantastic, actual "Loving Wives" story. After wading through the sludge of other stories, it is like coming out into the sun after a long rain to read this story.

Thank you for taking the time and effort to write this story. It was wonderful.

It WAS a breath of fresh air.

Beautifully told tale of the basic loving act. It would not be the same had his finger not entered the "forbidden place".

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Would hve been better without the "MASSIVE" cock and if the closing line had left out the f- word

Vince and his wife with the bed room eyes. Look like Vince stayed near her cervix all through the fuck, with his"massive" organ".