All Comments on 'Restless Nights Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
jeez

Keep the story on topic for crying out loud. It's like you have ADD with writing or something.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow

This left me so wet. Ignore what that other guy said, he has no idea what he is talking about

MushromMushromover 9 years agoAuthor
Not ADD

This story is not reflecting ADD or anything like this, it was an experiment in a "stream of consciousness" type of story. Everything was written in a close to "real time" mode, so we saw what was running through her mind as she masturbated.

In writing my stories, I often play with tense and narrative. This is one of those, and if you do not like it, don't read it.

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