bites yet we are all rather guilty, aren't we. You expressed this sentiment very well, good work :)
I really like this--it's tight and written with great precision.
Some great stanzas in this, very descriptive and the imagery is done so well. I especially enjoyed this one:
"We have trapped our universe
Cocooned it in charcoal grey
Suffocated it with fumes
Drowned it in diesel"
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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