by BareBackRider2
the story is written well, be erotic if you like the cuckold lifestyle. But I think its sad. the should divorce her because she dose not or never has loved him. And when he finds another, he should keep his fanasys to himself. The good part of this story is it makes you think how many men are foolish to try this with their wives. how many loose their wife to another
I have just one question? Why does this site publish such bullshit on this website and under this category?
It was well wriiten and very erotic. I feel that if you don't like cuckolding stories, then don't read them. and if you do read them, don't leave hateful comments. It takes a lot of guts to post a story.
Obviously there are a lot of people out there that do like cuck stories judging by the amount that have been posted lately, so if you enjoyed writing it keep writing. But you should consider expanding your horizons and writing about other erotica also.
I enjoy the cuckold stories so I read them. But like others say, if you don't like them don't read them. For example I hate black on white stories, but I don't post shitty comments, I just don't read them.
If you don't like these, then don't read them. And if you you do read them and post shitty comments, maybe you are a real life cuckold......... (Me thinkth thou doesth protest too much.... to paraphase Shakespeare)
fantasy....its what it is,I enjoyed this along with alot of other topics or fantasies,depends how the story engages you if it's worth reading or not
Hey I liked your story, the theme is there, the actions are their. The ideas are there. You need a little practice in your writing. You over use "she" you need to give her a name, makes it less like reading the Erotic stories of Dick. See dick, see dick run.
I like good Cuck stories. Unfortunately, yours was not in that catagory yet. You have potential, so I hope you continue. This effort was clumsy and sad. Suggest you visit the writers forum for some tips.
Liked your use of dialog. So many discriptions of the act on this site. Was kind of a downer ending though.
Keep it up, esl
The last few paragraphs told me this is just another stupid wimp husband story.
However, I give it 100 because of the author's honesty. Perhaps the title was not 100% clear but the indications were there. That is why I skipped to the end.
If I had been mislead, like most wimp writers do, I would have given it a zero. I commend the author.
You couldn't of just let her cheat but you had to rub hubby's face in it also humilitating him. Not sexy or erotic!
Gifted writer who made the story so exciting with an unusual twist. So beautiful for two old friends to release the sexual desires they were too frightened to express at school.
The story will only be complete when this young couple live permanently together, and the cuckold becomes a panty sucking house maid submissive for them.
Only for perverts or real brain sick ones!!!
How the fuck will you decide to like or dislike a story if you do not read it?!
The fact he didn't do his best to beat Justin to death the instant he pushed beyond the agreed upon boundaries makes this a ridiculous exposition of abnormal psychology. It should be in the Sci Fi or Mind Control sections.